I keep coming back to this. It's so beautiful. A year after the first time I experienced this I ended up doing a school assignment on it for my "Video Games as an Art Form" class, because it continues to stick with me as a prime example of the interactive medium's ability to uniquely express one's creative vision.
Hi, I made a PlayDate version of this game using it's bitsy-inspired engine, Pulp. I mostly made it for myself, but I was wondering if you'd be ok with me putting it up on my page, with links to this original and credit to you on the actual game itself.
Ok! The remake is up for download here, if you want me to change anything about it let me know! I hope it's not too strange that I just kind of copied the look and format of the original's page, I really wanted to just try to capture the feeling of it the best I can.
thanks for the link! lol i can respect the commitment to verisimilitude, it’s cool.
i don’t have a playdate so i wouldn’t be able to play it, but i love the greyscale look. maybe one day i’ll make a monochrome/1-bit bitsy game…
This is one of the few JS interactive stories that really moved me... I play it from time to time, and it never gets old. I really appreciate your work a lot.
I found it to be a touching story and quite well done to be made with the Bitsy engine, you can see that good use of pixel art makes a lot of difference in said engine, the music is very good and above all it is a beautiful poem.
this is the most beautiful game I have ever played. i have never seen anything like it. i wish i could create something as beautiful as this. i sound sooo emotional omfg but i loved it thats all :) amazing work, i hope you're incredibly proud of yourself!
Easily one of the loveliest things I have ever read. I recommend this poem to friends often. Thank you so much for such a captivating and heartfelt experience.
this is so wonderful. Simple, but sharp and well made. I love the art especially. The line "I weep because we are the same, and I do not know how to help us." will stick with me for a long time I think.
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I dont think i ever had a game make me cry this quick, 10/10
I keep coming back to this. It's so beautiful. A year after the first time I experienced this I ended up doing a school assignment on it for my "Video Games as an Art Form" class, because it continues to stick with me as a prime example of the interactive medium's ability to uniquely express one's creative vision.
BANGER :) :) :) :)
Thank you for existing
beautiful
This is so beautiful and inspiring... Thank You
Hey gang, if you want the music then it's
Arête
by Brambles
it’s in the game description mate, has been for the past 6+ years.
Ah- I'm an idiot XD
beautiful experience <3
Nice
so simple yet so good, the ending really hit close to home. And it helped <3
Beautiful, thank you. You made this game, and it helped.
Thank you for creating this game.
I felt like I was in a evanescent dream.
I keep coming back to this game. brings tears to my eyes everytime. thank you for your art
short but stunning the ending hit me like a sack of wet mice
Very simple, but quite inspired, both in graphics and writing.
Hi, I made a PlayDate version of this game using it's bitsy-inspired engine, Pulp. I mostly made it for myself, but I was wondering if you'd be ok with me putting it up on my page, with links to this original and credit to you on the actual game itself.
i don’t really mind as long as you make it clear in the title and thumbnail that it’s a remix/“cover” in addition to the crediting!
Ok! The remake is up for download here, if you want me to change anything about it let me know! I hope it's not too strange that I just kind of copied the look and format of the original's page, I really wanted to just try to capture the feeling of it the best I can.
thanks for the link! lol i can respect the commitment to verisimilitude, it’s cool. i don’t have a playdate so i wouldn’t be able to play it, but i love the greyscale look. maybe one day i’ll make a monochrome/1-bit bitsy game…
This is one of the few JS interactive stories that really moved me... I play it from time to time, and it never gets old. I really appreciate your work a lot.
So simple but so good. Inspiring
Very moving, thank you
this is my favorite thing on here. beautiful work.
A very beautiful poem! The ending got me emotional
OMG this was so good it made me cry a little. this was so sweet I loved this gam
I found it to be a touching story and quite well done to be made with the Bitsy engine, you can see that good use of pixel art makes a lot of difference in said engine, the music is very good and above all it is a beautiful poem.
very sweet thanks
wow. i didn't realize i was crying until it was over. thank you
Simply beautiful!! Thanks!!!
thank you for this poem.
a fantastic experience. a short, sweet, soft bite of story. thank you for making this. thank you for sharing it.
wow - that was really beautiful, thank you
well that was an experience
I fucking cried
this is the most beautiful game I have ever played. i have never seen anything like it. i wish i could create something as beautiful as this. i sound sooo emotional omfg but i loved it thats all :) amazing work, i hope you're incredibly proud of yourself!
Absolutely love. What a beautiful little game <3
This is a touching and relevant story for me recently. Thank you for sharing it.
i loveeeeeee it sooooooooooo cute i really wish to make it as as beautiful as this for university project.
Easily one of the loveliest things I have ever read. I recommend this poem to friends often. Thank you so much for such a captivating and heartfelt experience.
this is so wonderful. Simple, but sharp and well made. I love the art especially. The line "I weep because we are the same, and I do not know how to help us." will stick with me for a long time I think.
Loved this experience. Beautiful concept, writing, and music. Thanks for making this.
wow. i'm so glad someone shared this on another game... my new fave genre of poetry/storytelling
cool