i'm genuinely crying after playing.thank you for this, it's a gorgeous and evocative little story. not so many people can make something so short that can make you feel so much. <3
oh, it's a glacier that left millions of years ago! no mountains, just a very Great Lake (in this case, Michigan, but I was born next to Erie and my grandmother lived just north on the shores of Ontario...so apparently this is my destiny in some weird way). but i will whisper a hello to what's left of it and maybe the mountains will hear. i miss them too! <3
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You're really talented. You took something so short and simple and made it beautiful and full of emotions. I'm blown away
!!! holy shit.
This is beautiful 🥲
what little emotional stability I had left broke after this but like OH MY DOGE IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL
this is beyond beautiful!!
i'm genuinely crying after playing.thank you for this, it's a gorgeous and evocative little story. not so many people can make something so short that can make you feel so much. <3
this is very beautiful...thanku
absolutely beautiful! wow
Lovely :)
Wow this is deep stuff O_O
SPOILER
was she dying so she wished to visit again tomorrow?
no
I should visit the ocean again.
this made me smile;-)
Beautiful game.
Thank you for the gam!
I am smashed by how beautiful it is. Really masterful use of Bitsy.
A very tight little poem of a game. Game as short story. I loved it.
My God, what a fairy game!
This music is great!
this song... that feeling... This game is beautiful.
I feel like it's 200 years ago and I'm listening to this story at a campfire. It feels like a folktale.
this game is so incredibly beautiful
this game is poetry.
it was beautiful, thank you for making this.
I teared up in the end.
this is amazing.
I love this.
What a great experience. Thank you.
that was very beautiful. well done.
This is so beautiful. It genuinely made me cry.
The final line is beautiful. 10/10 dude that was a really wonderful little experience.
This was a magical experience...
Thank you for creating this...
gorgeous
Maybe I understand the story. It's beautiful, it makes me want to see the ocean.
a wonderful work
It's very short but very good, it's quite nostalgic. I love history, design, music, everything.Thanks for doing this
beauty
and now i'm in tears. gorgeous.
i want to go visit the ocean too. maybe tomorrow i will visit one of its relatives in the footprint of a glacier, a long time ago.
say hi to the glacier! i miss the mountains
oh, it's a glacier that left millions of years ago! no mountains, just a very Great Lake (in this case, Michigan, but I was born next to Erie and my grandmother lived just north on the shores of Ontario...so apparently this is my destiny in some weird way). but i will whisper a hello to what's left of it and maybe the mountains will hear. i miss them too! <3
ohhh thats so cool!
Breathtaking. A beautiful work.
This is really cool! I think the fact that you call it poem instead of game is also good as it really shows what this gam- poem is!
Very cute art and very nice story and atmosphear, thank you
thank you. this was… wow.
but now i miss the ocean.
oh wow